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Saturday, June 12, 2010

SOLITUDE

should i have called her bak
wen she said she was to leave..
should i have cuddled her...
wen she cried her heart out....


no not wat had to b done...
no not wat already been done...
all dat is known is dat...
i m here alone... as ever..



days not forgotten...
those walks on path filled wid roses...
days not wished to b remembered....
those evening laughters by the shore of the sea....


was i foolish to let her go..
so was she foolish to leave me alone....
all i know now is dat
i m here all alone.... as ever.....



should have i told her before...
dat my life only means by her side.....
should i have shown her dat....
my heart was not mine... but herss???



screaming at the opputunities lost...
yelling at the vapourized time..
a state of helplessness... becoming restlessness...
all now known is dat.. here i m all alone..as ever


3 comments:

  1. wow...wonderful...poem...u have clearly depicted a men's feeling on his separated lady love...thats the greatness of an creator, who can think in different shoes...gr8 going gal....kudos

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  2. wah g... nice one yar..it really shows wad a guy feels when he loses his heart to someone who has left him... great words...nice makeup... :D

    keep posting :D..cheers..

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  3. @indherjith
    thankzz a lot...:D
    @nadzz
    luv u... thankz yaar!!:D

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